Prose for thought – a bit late

Sorry I’m late on this. Its been a very busy time.

Here is this week’s poem. I wrote it aged 15-16 (I’m not sure which as I just wrote 1993 on the page, not a month). I think I may have been on a bus or train when I wrote it. I hope you like it.

Invisible and Blind – 1993 Aged 15-16

I’m watching.
All these people around me,
I am invisible to them.
They walk through me.
I won’t meet them again.
Does it matter?
Do I care?
Their noises surround me,
But I don’t hear it.
Waiting for them to all fade away.
As soon they will.
Frowning, laughing, screaming, crying.
And I did not see them,
Until today.
There are so many of them
That they all blend together
As part of the scenery,
Even though each is unique.
Look around.
Do you see them?
Do I?
Perhaps no-one does.
A world full of people.
Each one alone.
Invisible and Blind.

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6 Thoughts on “Prose for thought – a bit late

  1. Thats pretty powerful stiff for a teen.
    Well writ xx

  2. Wow – thats brillant at 15!! You must write more! x

  3. I am SO SORRY. I was just setting up Prose For Thought for this Thursday and only just realised that you linked up. Please forgive me for not commenting sooner – you must think I am very rude! I agree with Helen, this is brilliant – you NEED to write more. Hope you will link up again 🙂 xx

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